hello blogging world,
Did you know that Shelly Ann is the worlds fastest women and if you did not well know you know that.I have thought about some similes about Shelly Ann. here it is
She is as fast as a cheater
She is as beautiful as a butterfly
She is brave as lion
thanks for looking at my blog if there is anything that you think a need to work on please comment in my blog.
Kia Ora Faisa, I hope you are having a good day!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Eliza and I’m working as a blog commenter on the Summer Learning Journey this summer. I’m looking forward to reading your posts over the next few weeks! If you want to know more about me, you can check out my blog.
I really like the warm welcome you've used at the start of your post, and the similes you've used to describe Shelly-Ann Fraser-Pryce - it really shows you've thought about the activity and have been creative! If you have the chance next time, maybe you could write a little but more as this will bring more people to your blog!
I am trying to get better at running myself, although I don't think I will ever be as fast as a cheater, or Shelly-Ann for that matter!
Thank you so much for writing such an awesome post, I really enjoyed reading it. I hope that you will keep blogging with us over the summer. Keep working on the teaser week activities and on the 16th of December you can start the Week 1 activities.
Have a good rest of your day!
Eliza.
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ReplyDeletehey Faisa,
ReplyDeleteI have read your blog post and you have done a awesome job. Maybe next time you should reread and edit. Make sure to put your punctuation in the right place.
I have done a blog post on my blog about why it is unfair that the all blacks get more money then the black ferns you can go check it out if you want.
bye
yours sincerely,
Marwah
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