Last week the year sixes and I went to Waikowhai- Intermediate.We were one of the lucky schools because Waikowhai intermediate was just one block away.One of Hay Park park school's wonderful teachers Mrs Eagleson was kind enough to lead us there.Once we were there I was amazed by their wonderful performances( Kapa Haka, Hip hop and choir) Sooon after they gave us a tour around the school. During this experience I learnt a lot about Wahikowhai-Intermediate and what the students do there.
Hi Faisa,
ReplyDeleteI would love to go to Waikowhai Intermidiate. Mrs Eagleson is a really nice person, . You forgot a space after the first full stop.
HI Faisa,
ReplyDeleteI Like how you made a small paragraph about your visit to Waikowhai Intermediate. I would like to go to Waikowhai Intermediate. Maybe next time read your work and check your punctuation. Also you dont put a space after a bracket.